it's a very confusing start, i don't know where it's getting at. However, you're obviously really good at writing a descriptive scene. I like you're style of writing; it's the type I'd like to read more about. Try making the start a bit more sense because i don't what your purpose of being in the forest is. Over all, it's a very good piece of writing! Best wishes and good luck!
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